Feedback on Planning

Well done, there is some excellent and thorough planning and research on this blog.  Jack and Harry, you are both working at a high level four as you are clearly engaging with each task and using it to further your concept.  Tom, you are not producing work of the same standard, largely due to lack of time spent on tasks and an absence from planning updates.  Currently you are on a level three.  You all have comments and actions to address so please read carefully and email me when you have made amendments.